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Thursday, January 15, 2015

Flannery O'Connor on "The Nature and Aim of Fiction"

 

Recently, I read a collection of Flannery O’Connor’s essays called Mystery and Manners: Occasional Prose. Aside from the fact that I really love that term—“occasional prose”—I also have been known to love me some Flannery O’Connor fiction, so I was very interested to read her opinions on writing and writers. The articles and essays reproduced in this volume were most often presented by Miss O’Connor to writing classes or groups at universities or churches, and they’ve been condensed where duplicity occurred. (She’d speak from time to time, often on the same themes.) Sometimes her focus is somewhat narrow: “The Grotesque in Southern Fiction” or “Catholic Writers;” occasionally, her concerns seemed dated to this modern reader. But the cornerstone of the collection, at least to me, is the essay titled “The Nature and Aim of Fiction.” O’Connor’s insights about the creative process, her strong opinions about the teaching of creative writing, her commiseration with anyone sharing the “terrible experience” of writing a novel—this essay alone is worth the price of admission.

O’Connor manages to demystify and mystify the art of writing, all at once. “In the first place,” she says, “there is no such thing as THE writer.” She insists that there is no one way to write, and no one type of writer. She eschews writers who are interested in money or prestige. She throws out the term “art,” and immediately clarifies with a down-to-earth definition of it. “The person who aims after art in his work aims after truth, in an imaginative sense, no more and no less.”

Yet, when she gets into the brass tacks of the process and what it’s like for her, she teeters between concrete advice and idealistic intangibles (which is exactly what writing is like). In a story, she says, “specific characters and events influence each other to form a meaningful narrative.” Some writers, she says, aim to write stories but what they end up writing is something else altogether. So then they try to learn something about technique, which, “in the minds of many is something rigid, something like a formula.” This is wrong thinking, she says. “In the best stories (technique) is something organic, something that grows out of the material.”

And then it’s back to the practical. She discusses the necessity for fiction to be rooted in the senses. Avoid abstractions, she says. Good advice. Only don’t go too far with a naturalistic approach, she warns, because “in a work of art we can be extremely literal, without being in the least naturalistic. Art is selective, and its truthfulness is the truthfulness of the essential that creates movement.” Here is where, for me, her ideas break out and grow wings. O’Connor talks about the sort of vision required by writers, that they should be “able to see different levels of reality in one image or one situation. “In a good novel,” she says, “more always happens than we are able to take in at once, more happens than meets the eye.” (There is an inked-in exclamation mark here in my book.) Symbols are a way into this sort of vision, having a complex personal view is another. Fiction should feel like it is unfolding around the reader, as though the moment of creation is ongoing. And it’s this intangible, magical kind of thing that will have many writers nodding their head enthusiastically while reading this essay. It must have been very amusing for the writing classes who heard her speak. She’s very critical of creative writing classes in general and if you must have a writing teacher, she says, his job should be mostly to tell you what isn’t working. True writers have a gift, she believes, and a teacher “can’t put the gift into you, but if he finds it there, he can try to keep it from going in an obviously wrong direction.”


Although O’Connor kindly gives practical guidance at every point of this essay (“The novelist makes his statements by selection, and if he is any good, he selects every word for a reason, every detail for a reason, every incident for a reason, and arranges them in a certain time-sequence for a reason.”), I didn’t believe for one moment that this would be a skill someone could cultivate, this seeing with a “complex personal view,” the sort of 3D vision a writer has to have “if he is ever going to write stories that have any chance of becoming a permanent part of our literature.”

O’Connor’s worldview and her theories about the craft of writing fiction were certainly formed, as everyone’s are, by her unique life experience. She believed everything a writer needs to know is picked up surviving childhood. “If you can’t make something out of a little experience, you probably won’t be able to make it out of a lot.” What you can make out of this short essay is a lot, however, and I’d strongly recommend you have a read. “One thing that is always with the writer—no matter how long he has written or how good he is—is the continuing process of learning how to write.”

You can find O'Connor's essay in its entirety here.

Monday, February 10, 2014

Immediacy in Fiction


 
For the past year, I’ve been reading lots of short stories. I outlined some of the collections in a previous post here, and three made my Best of 2013 list here. I just finished two more: Dear Life by Alice Munro, and a collection chosen by David Sedaris entitled Children Playing Before a Statue of Hercules, which includes work by Flannery O’Connor, Jhumpa Lahiri and Katherine Mansfield, among others, and which was recommended to me by a thoughtful friend (thanks, Margery!). All of the stories in this one were remarkable and it was interesting to think of each as being an influence on Sedaris’s writing and what I know of him. I was particularly touched by Jean Thompson’s Applause, Applause, which has something to say to writers struggling in one way or another. Munro’s collection begins with a couple of knock-outs, really just masterful stuff, and is strong throughout. I guess those Nobel people know a little something after all.

This morning, I’m thinking about all of these stories I’ve recently read and trying to put a finger on what, if anything, they all have in common. And this may seem like a very obvious thing that I’m about to say but here it is: all of these stories have an immediacy and familiarity about them. They waste no time in making the reader feel that he has been plopped down into the middle of something, from their opening lines. This is the nature of the short story, isn’t it, the brevity, the impact? There’s no time for long asides or extended pages of back story and really, for any labored character analysis. Here’s the opening to Applause, Applause:

"Poor Bernie, Ted thought, as rain thudded against the car like rotten fruit. Watching it stream and bubble on the windshield, he promised himself not to complain about it lest Bernie’s feelings be hurt. He was anxious to impress this on his wife. Poor Bernie, he said aloud. Things never work out the way he plans."

Right away, we have a relationship, the uneven balance of it, and questions about what hasn’t worked out for Bernie and why Ted feels anxious about his wife, and why the rain matters, etc., etc., etc. From the first lines, you are there with Ted, seeing the rain ruin the day, feeling the pity he feels, wondering what comes next.

And from Munro’s story, Gravel:

"At that time we were living beside a gravel pit. Not a large one, hollowed out by monster machinery, just a minor pit that a farmer must have made some money from years before. In fact, the pit was shallow enough to lead you to think that there might have been some other intention for it—foundations for a house, maybe, that never made it any further."

Here, we don’t even know who’s speaking yet but we know something about them and we’re right there: country, farmland, a poor area, perhaps, where the character has had time to contemplate this simple hole in the ground. A feeling of something failed. And don’t you just know something is going to happen in regards to that pit?

We always hear advice about the opening of novels and how they must grab you from the first page, but it’s even more necessary in a short story. The writer must have a sense of urgency but yet a patience too, trusting that the reader will be able to sort things out even if she’s dropped en media res. The true masters of the form know how to condense, how to introduce, how to establish at once a place, a time, a mood. Honestly, I think writers of any form would benefit to dive into shorter forms once in while—both the reading and the writing of them. It reminds you how precious words are.
"As soon as we express something, we devalue it strangely. We believe ourselves to have dived down into the depths of the abyss, and when we once again reach the surface, the drops of water on our pale fingertips no longer resemble the ocean from which they came...Nevertheless, the treasure shimmers in the darkness unchanged." ---Franz Kafka