At any rate, there are some poems that stay with me and I return to them countless times for inspiration and pleasure. Reading Seamus Heaney's The Rain Stick is like having a piece of rich chocolate cake, or whatever food stuff causes fireworks to explode in your mouth. It's like listening to your favorite music while someone massages your back. It's a one-stop, all-you-can-eat buffet for the literally-minded.
A word from it came to me this morning..."sluice." See how Heaney has paired it with "rush." Say this over and over; note context in poem; look up sluice at dictionary.com. I promise you won't be disappointed.
Without further ado:
The Rain Stick
Seamus Heaney
Upend the rain stick and what happens next
Is a music that you never would have known
To listen for. In a cactus stalk
Downpour, sluice-rush, spillage and backwash
Come flowing through. You stand there like a pipe
Being played by water, you shake it again lightly
And diminuendo runs through all its scales
Like a gutter stopping trickling. And now here comes
A sprinkle of drops out of the freshened leaves,
Then subtle little wets off grass and daisies;
Then glitter-drizzle, almost-breaths of air.
Upend the stick again. What happens next
Is undiminished for having happened once,
Twice, ten, a thousand times before.
Who cares if all the music that transpires
Is the fall of grit or dry seeds through a cactus?
You are like a rich man entering heaven
Through the ear of a raindrop. Listen now again.
Mary, have you read any of Louise Gluck? Try "October" - absolutely beautiful words!
ReplyDeleteRegards, Elizabeth